Image courtesy of officemango.com - Horror-Bites Challenge 3)
A Friendly Face
Peyton catches sight of her; watching, from the other side
of the glass. Her image sister; features
familiar, even in reversal. They smile
at each other – a welcome and greeting.
She is gone by the time she reaches her destination; glimpse and
gone. Still, they have seen one another
now. Introduced themselves.
Peyton spots her again the next day – following, tracking,
as she walks the pavement in the sun, alongside the series of shop
windows. They keep pace with one
another. Peyton cannot resist a casual
wave. Sees the hand raised to her right
in reflection.
Peyton thinks she imagines it as the days pass but finds
herself pondering whether the outline is more distinct as it travels with her,
across mirror, water, glass; shining surface.
The expression stays with her, though she seeks to leave it behind. Eyes watching, ever. They follow her movements. She wants to shut them out. Impossible.
They face each other instead, the silica partition the only
divide between them. Peyton knows now
where this leads. The double feature
pupils, left where right should be, tell her so. They are without compassion; compelling her
to understand they are competitors now. Pretence
of friendship abandoned.
She wants to win. She
wants to cross over. To trade off. To perform the switch. The problem being, Peyton doesn’t know how to
stop her. To do that, she has to stop
seeing. Stop looking. Into the face of the reflection which has no
intention of abandoning her. Peyton
wonders how long she will last.
(277 words)
Comment
Another flash fiction piece for the "Horror-Bites" challenge.
What a clever idea from the prompt. You've woven an intriguing yet sinister tale that has left me feeling for Peyten, urging her to look away! It's not going to end well at all for her. Good job. x
ReplyDeleteThanks very much! Yes - I don't foresee a happy ending here... ;)
ReplyDeleteA really unusual tale which I adore. I agree not a happy ending in site :)
ReplyDeleteThanks very much! Credit goes to the photo prompt for helping me come up with the idea!
ReplyDeleteVery unique idea.
ReplyDeleteThanks - appreciated!
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