Monday 24 February 2014

To Wish The Words Unspoken (Trifextra)

This week's Trifecta challenge is of the Trifextra 33 word variety, with the 33 words to precede the ending "that wasn't what I meant".  The piece below was my take on it:-


To Wish The Words Unspoken

Iz had had time to consider over the years.  To wish the words unsaid; to have kept them in her head.  “I want to stay here forever, like this.” 

Fanged kiss, blood-letting later - that wasn’t what I meant.

10 comments:

  1. Forever is a very long time. Good job with the prompt.

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  2. Ahh, regretful vampires. Eternal life for me would be just about the worst punishment possible.

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  3. Nice vamp twist

    Enjoyed

    Ally :)

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  4. Good work. Well done. Vampires can easily grant that wish but not the way it's meant.

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  5. Be careful what you wish for. Especially when it involves drinking human blood for all eternity.

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